Perfect (I'm Amazed By You)

by xToBeWithYoux   Jan 30, 2009


Let our souls soar
to the heavens,
let them open every door:
Our love does the same.

Gazing into your eyes
sets my heart on fire.
Your love is my prize:
And boy, I'm addicted.

I hold you close to me,
forever twirling
in this aroma of glee:
Our first dance.

White satin ruffled,
black tuxedo smooth.
My words are muffled:
"I'll love you forever."

Our song keeps playing,
the night is young.
We keep on swaying:
Oh, I'm amazed by you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "Let our souls soar
    To the heavens,
    Let them open every door:
    Our love does the same."

    ^^I found this opening stanza to be incredibly sweet, so adorable and filled with such passion that I can't wait to continue on.

    "Gazing into your eyes
    Sets my heart on fire.
    Your love is my prize:
    And boy, I'm addicted."

    ^^I'm finding this to become better and better as I go along, the intensity and depth here is beautiful.

    "White satin ruffled,
    Black tuxedo smooth.
    My words are muffled:
    "I'll love you forever."

    Our song keeps playing,
    The night is young.
    We keep on swaying:
    Oh, I'm amazed by you. "

    ^^The imagery within these two stanzas is beautifully portrayed, it creates such beautiful visuals for the reader.

    I loved the flow throughout, and I enjoyed this piece.