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by xToBeWithYoux Jan 30, 2009 category : Love, romance / i love you
Let our souls soar to the heavens, let them open every door: Our love does the same. Gazing into your eyes sets my heart on fire. Your love is my prize: And boy, I'm addicted. I hold you close to me, forever twirling in this aroma of glee: Our first dance. White satin ruffled, black tuxedo smooth. My words are muffled: "I'll love you forever." Our song keeps playing, the night is young. We keep on swaying: Oh, I'm amazed by you.
by Jenni Marie
"Let our souls soar To the heavens, Let them open every door: Our love does the same." ^^I found this opening stanza to be incredibly sweet, so adorable and filled with such passion that I can't wait to continue on. "Gazing into your eyes Sets my heart on fire. Your love is my prize: And boy, I'm addicted." ^^I'm finding this to become better and better as I go along, the intensity and depth here is beautiful. "White satin ruffled, Black tuxedo smooth. My words are muffled: "I'll love you forever." Our song keeps playing, The night is young. We keep on swaying: Oh, I'm amazed by you. " ^^The imagery within these two stanzas is beautifully portrayed, it creates such beautiful visuals for the reader. I loved the flow throughout, and I enjoyed this piece.