This is a really great poem.. i felt .. relaxed while reading it.. it was very vivid and imaginative.. which is always good when reading a poem :) .. i think its great. 5/5

~Michelle~

I haven't read or commented anything from you in a while, I'm sorry! And as I'm a bit rushed for time, this comment won't be really long but I thought I'd say how I loved your imagery and word choice in this poem, it was really captivating. You've gotten so much better, you can see, you're evolving as a poet and it's brililant.

'tall mountains painted by winter's white gift.'

This is simple but so beautiful, 'gift' is such a great word to describe winter's bestowal of beautiful white upon lush green valleys. I could go through every line and say the same things but I'm not going to, you should be proud of this, really. I'll start reading/commenting your work more often :)

5/5 !