by Courageous Dreamer Jan 31, 2009
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Violent skies plentiful with clouds ready to burst with rain, |
by Good Enough
I like it. it describes a thunderstorm well. it has a good flow and in my perspective its like what a society is. good job 5/5 |
Absolutely stunning descriptions of a storm, I always find them to be fascinating and love to watch them. You really expressed and portrayed the destruction it does cause, and so much imagery passed through my mind it was like I was there watching a storm! Excellent work, you wrote this so well, take care and keep writing... |