Absolutely stunning descriptions of a storm, I always find them to be fascinating and love to watch them. You really expressed and portrayed the destruction it does cause, and so much imagery passed through my mind it was like I was there watching a storm! Excellent work, you wrote this so well, take care and keep writing...

I like it. it describes a thunderstorm well. it has a good flow and in my perspective its like what a society is. good job 5/5