What A Day

by Katie   Jan 31, 2009


You held me close
As I cried away.
We never thought
It would end this way.

Now you're gone
And here I stay.
It's so surreal.
What a day.

You left me here
The day I died.
We always knew
That you had lied.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    You held me close
    As I cried away.
    We never thought
    It would end this way.

    (such a sad start, but it makes me want to know what happens. nice.)

    Now you're gone
    And here I stay.
    It's so surreal.
    What a day.

    (i like how you pulled the title in on this stanza)

    You left me here
    The day I died.
    We always knew
    That you had lied.

    (good ending, i would have liked it to be stronger, but nce work anyways. Shanik

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