You held me close
As I cried away.
We never thought
It would end this way.

(such a sad start, but it makes me want to know what happens. nice.)

Now you're gone
And here I stay.
It's so surreal.
What a day.

(i like how you pulled the title in on this stanza)

You left me here
The day I died.
We always knew
That you had lied.

(good ending, i would have liked it to be stronger, but nce work anyways. Shanik