Wow Ingrid i like how you unfold this poem. It's just beautiful the way you depicted it.I aslo lik ethe idea that you inserted some dialog in the poem which creates a diversity o style that is infuse in one.I think you have craft this to perfection and the way i see it, this is nothing more than a winner

Excellent Job
5/5

This is so beautifully written, there were so many emotions that were pouring out, and really gave the reader clear visuals and feelings about what was going on. A poem that makes you think, this had so much meaning and was so in-deepth, I really loved reading this. 5/5 from me, take care...

Seniors the forgotten group especially if they have no family. Not many people take the time to care or help when it is needed. It makes me sad more so now that I am in that in age bracket and soon approaching the no family way of life. It makes you stop and think what will happen when that day comes and you are truly alone, no family, will anyone care or will anyone help. You did a good job on this one. 5/5

This poem brought a tear to my eye.
We've all seen the 'old soldier' advanced in years, proudly walking past with a case or possession in their hands.
I simply loved this piece of work Ingrid. One of your best I think.