Hanging

Very nice write. I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did, but that's a good thing. The last line ended it perfectly. Very nice flow of emotions as well. 5/5

Well eventhough the poem is short. I can feel the pain the the protagonist is going thru. All the suicidal thoughts were compacted into one.I like the idea of the suicide was commited on the place where they 1st met. It's certainly a tragic ending. But i absolutely love it

Excellent Job
5/5

Thanks i just wrote tht off the top of my head

This poem is great. I love d way u start off like if its a suicide and then finish of with where we fisrt met!! 5/5