Comments : Hanging

  • 15 years ago

    by JusTxXxLiezZz

    This poem is great. I love d way u start off like if its a suicide and then finish of with where we fisrt met!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Thanks i just wrote tht off the top of my head

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well eventhough the poem is short. I can feel the pain the the protagonist is going thru. All the suicidal thoughts were compacted into one.I like the idea of the suicide was commited on the place where they 1st met. It's certainly a tragic ending. But i absolutely love it

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CrossCut

    Very nice write. I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did, but that's a good thing. The last line ended it perfectly. Very nice flow of emotions as well. 5/5