by CanUKissAwayMyPain Feb 1, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Feeling Loved. |
by Jenni Marie
This is adorable.. |
by Hollymariee
The capitals really bothered me .. They threw me off alot . But I like how in some of your poems you can make statements artistic . This one is really well done again .. Except for a few spelling mistakes and such . 5/5 |
by kelleyana
Great idea but needs some polishing, also needs some punctuation. I think that now you'd the idea of the poem, all you needs to do is put it together. We all learn that way. Well done anyway, kel. |