The flow was on and off on some parts of ur poem. i got lost of what u were trying to say here. the word didnt go that much into this piece.
4/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

"Hearts entangled in emotional jungle
Laying inside immortal's tranquil temple
Dreams and reality coexist in our sparkle
Defying gravity, flying to another level"

- This stanza stuck out to me. And, not in a good way. Well, it's not a bad way... I guess. But, you know it's like they didn't flow too well and were a bit more blunt than the rest of the poem. They fit with the rest of the poem okay, as long as you're wanting this to stick out a bunch.

I've always been a fan or your poetry and this is another one to add to the list. Even with that one stanza the poem is still an amazing poem. Kudos.

This one has a flow within the quatrain that stands out in the beautiful passionate love poem
great imagery transcending the natural realm

Another well written love poem. You did a lot better on this one I think. The rhymes were really good and again, the imagery was amazing. There was a good flow to this poem as well, and it turned out to be a really nice story. Good stuff.