That was sweet :)...although i sensed sad feelings but you ended the poem with hope that removed the sadness...i think every girl needs someone to be like a"giant rock facing the sea" for her...i enjoyed reading it that i kept reading it over and over :D...its just that after reading it...you'll just deeply want to sleep inbetween the arms of your love...or that's how I felt...

i liked it CJ :), keep writting...wish you the best in life :)

So sleep my love, and dream in my hands
Of a new morning, an hope that will expand

A tree always bends to the high wind, never break
Life is not what you see, life is what we make

^^^Those were lines I really loved Moucha:)
Very touching and deep...yes indeed there is much sadness in your poem, but you are young and I know in time you will find what you are looking for. Have faith my friend:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Hearing your heartbeat, touching your fear within
Hiding you from them, trying to not let them in
You just need to heal, the hurt inside your eyes
They are bleeding inside, washing off their lies

^^^This a is beautiful opening. You made the pain feel so soft

Lying in your bed, thinking about the flood
Your eyes are red, the tears mixing with blood
My hand in your hand, a shadow over you
But that won't matter, if I cried with you too

^^^I like how you describe the sadness here.You have created a very strong depiction of sadness

Sleep sweety, let the flood rush out to me
I'll be like a giant rock facing the rough sea
So sleep my love, and dream in my hands
Of a new morning, an hope that will expand

^^^I love how you used the metaphors here and be a gentleman leanding a shoulder
btw i feel kindda weird how you phrase the 3rd & 4th line... this is how i would have phrase it:
So sleep my love, dream in my hands
Of a new morning and hope it will expand

Night after night, the hurts will go away
There will be another dawn, and another day
A tree always bends to the high wind, never break
Life is not what you see, life is what we make

^^^ beautiful way to end it. It is so true I totally agree with the last line that you have laid down

Overall you have penned down a beautiful poem.Never have pain felt so serene

Excellent Job
5/5

WOW!!!
this one was so deep
I loved it so much CJ

keep on writing :)

Such a sweet poem...I loved the part about you being like a rock facing the sea. Beautiful!