by Cara
*gulp* Amahhhzzzzingg! :] |
Beautiful. Enough said. |
by The Prince
This poem won because of it's beautiful imagery combined with simple phrases and syntax. |
Mmm, this is SUCH a beautiful poem! It is simple, yet so detailed in heart (: I love the form in which you wrote it, it was fluid, and just very heartwarming. "Planting butterfly kisses upon his sultry lips" That was one of my favorite lines. I adore the vocabulary you used throughout this piece, 'hands trembling,' 'infinite tenderness,' you really penned a nice and comforting piece. Fabulous job, and a well deserved win! Congrats, and keep it up! |
Wow! What a great poem Ingrid!! |