by Daisy if you do Feb 2, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
Pieces of Paper |
by Nicko
I like the journey you have taken us on here, from dawn till dusk, youth till old age with our story stored on paper, a road map of memories, unfortunately most of mine have been thrown in the bin, but I'm hanging on to snippets of my kids! Good rhyme and rhythm, thought provoking, well done. |
Wow...this is unique, this is so so unique. Never thought of anything like this. Awesome. Very nicely written friend. |
by Deana
An awesome write Kay, The rhyming is perfect. The message oh so true, my worst nightmare...paper. and yet in some ways so important. Those little memories to pull out later and prove to us that it really happened! Excellent! |
by Lonely Rider
After a long time :) ... |
by Cindy
Kay |