Bravery ( Senryu)

by Ingrid   Feb 2, 2009


Bravery ( Senryu)

Truly brave is he,
who admits defeat and flaws
yet stands tall with grace

A contest poem on the subject bravery.

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Good work Ingrid! True words spoken in this poem!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    Simple yet full of a deep meaning. Admitting to our mistakes can be one of the hardest things sometimes yet it is one of the bravets acts that one can do in his life.
    Great job !!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I love this! Wow, all your poems I'm reading I tend to really find the truth in them.. your words are so simple yet they speak so much. This poem speaks of bravery, in which.. you believe if someone can admit their flaws and still remain standing tall with grace, they are definatly brave.. and I agree with you one hundred percent on that statement. Great write, I love how such few words can express the truth of life.

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Bravery is something that i respect a great deal. Not the typical kind of bravery, you know, not scared of anything.. but the kind you talked about here.
    An amazing poem Ingrid, said so much in so few words. The simplicity of the words only made me look deeper into the meaning. Really awesome work :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    Simple..but great.
    I loved the topic..bravery, haven't really thought someone would write about it one day.
    a great Senryu lovely Ingrid.
    I miss you hunnie.

    Nee
    Xxx