Huh, this message is a very familiar message that many poets write. Sort of funny how it the message is a little too close to a poem of mine you commented.

The flow wasn't very choppy, but it mightve been how I read it. I think you could have expressed your vocabulary a bit more, as I've read a few other of your poems.

4/5

Which one?

This is beautiful the flow and the rhythm and rhyme conveys a desired love wonderfully