Comments : Better Without

  • 15 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved it

  • 15 years ago

    by umbra

    Another amazing job Rolo! I had to read this poem a couple of times because the flow seemed quick and I almost missed the awesome meaning crammed in every pore of it! This poem was so striking that it recalled my own experiences of such a hard time in my life. One can only hope that time shows the wisdom our hearts so often ignore.

  • 13 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Nicely written, i can relate.
    rhyming and rythm, were wonderfully penned.
    nothing and no one, could attempt to amend.

  • 13 years ago

    by Razors Edge

    Friendship poems can say so much about the person that writes them
    easy flow and rhyme.