I liked this poem it was brilliant and deep i hope you are ok

keep writing

Each day i paint a smile upon my face,
To cover all the wrong.
those lines made the poem!
loved this poem well done!
xo 5/5

Wow-intense. So many things that this poem could be referring to-doesnt spell anything out to the reader which is good for a change.
Very insightful and reflective
another 5/5 :) aish

And i just soldier on,
Each day i paint a smile upon my face,
To cover all the wrong.

i really like this part, it flowed and made a good start to the poem :)