The black raven

A very dark, intriguing poem Ingrid, I love the great words that you use here, giving this poem great imagery and substance.
This poem is a winner Ingrid!

Yeah, I am! jk, very good!

5/5
the Raven

"The black raven
tries to regain command
once more", never let this black raven regain command. This poem is very dark, it must be a sad moment you wrote this. We all had dull moment but after the rain the sun will shine again. Hugs, kel.

Eeep! i was not expecting that.. although i should have taken notice of the category haha. Wow, that was intense and wonderful. Okay, wonderful i probably shouldnt use, as it was a dark poem.. i might sound a little twisted? haha. I mean, the structure, the way you wrote it, was wonderfully done. The topic is very different from the poetry i normally read from you, but it was really well done.
It seems you can write about anything!
5/5

It is very different than you usually write and it is dark. 5/5