Lost hopeful soul

by ForsakenBeautyXx   Feb 3, 2009


I love you. dont you know. how much you have taken over my soul. just dont take all of me. then there will be nothing, nothing for me to look in the mirror and see.

if you care for me...i beg you to let me see. dont hide. dont run away. because if you love me...im always here to stay. just a little whisper will do. shed the light on me that we both know is true. and then...maybe YOU will see...how much you mean to ME.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    The structure of this poem could use a little work...instead of writing it out like that you could separate your lines into different stanzas, that would help alot, and be better to understand.

    You was able to choose a fantastic title, it went along with your writing and most of the time thats hard to do for some people.

    It expresses alot of emotions and allows readers to know exactly how you felt when you wrote this.

    Good job and keep up the wonderful work

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