by Marcus Feb 3, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
new love
*I tried to switch my writing style up with this one |
I can't get over how brilliant all of your poems are! Especially this one! I felt the emotions buried with each word. Fantastic job! It was beautiful! |
by Cantchangeme
Brilliant poem, Loved the deep meaning to it and it was written beautifully. With an outstanding word choice and good rhyming style. |
I loved it!!! The writing style is amazing and I loved all of your discriptive words. Also, awesome job at displaying your emotion. Great job! |
by Nobodys Hero
I really like this poem it's beautifully written! Really great job =] |
by Hollymariee
I think it's awesome that you chose to try a different style , that's really brave of you . And you did a really good job on top of that ! The rhymes are really good , and the message is clear .. A little work to be done on the flow though . |