by Aimz
The flow in this poem is good. I enjoyed reading it. Favourite line definately 'A whirlwind of emotion led to an entangled soul |
by Annaam
I like it... It's clearly visible that yOu've wOrked hard On it... I lOve the detail.... There is a goOd flOw and rhythm tO it.. And the vOcab is really goOd ! |
Each line delivered passion and desire and the AB Scheme is a challenge you did well with |
by mrsmoore
Very Captivating! I began to read it and followed its wonderful flow. I love the wording and the style. Great Poem!! 5/5 |
by Cyber Saiyan
Wow, what a great poem. |
by Sapphire
"Living in solitude with a vacant heart |
by Hollymariee
I think it's awesome that you chose to try a different style , that's really brave of you . And you did a really good job on top of that ! The rhymes are really good , and the message is clear .. A little work to be done on the flow though . |
by Nobodys Hero
I really like this poem it's beautifully written! Really great job =] |
I loved it!!! The writing style is amazing and I loved all of your discriptive words. Also, awesome job at displaying your emotion. Great job! |
by Cantchangeme
Brilliant poem, Loved the deep meaning to it and it was written beautifully. With an outstanding word choice and good rhyming style. |
I can't get over how brilliant all of your poems are! Especially this one! I felt the emotions buried with each word. Fantastic job! It was beautiful! |