by loving my kids tessa and savannah Feb 3, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I was going to a party mom just to have fun you told me to be home by 11:00 as I got to the party we all had fun I could not wait to come home and tell you ever thing you told me that you would see me later mom something’s wrong now all I see is black well mom I guess I'm not coming home because people are careless and don't care and tonight I was killed by a Drunk driver who did not think what might happen so tell baby sister it will be OK make sure you tell daddy I love him. |
by Marcus
Interesting theme. Doesnt seem like you put much effort into it though. It has potential of being a good poem if you re construct it and apply effort |