Great poem. The rhyme pattern makes it a little difficult to comprehend but you pulled it off. Good poem. Nice vocab. 5/5

"Success of endurance and determination
Depends on your heart, soul, and mind
Working steady to the time of termination"

^^each line is inspiring and motivating ... especially for those having low self esteem and confidence ... well written,...

"While the iron is hot without procrastination
Strike with rhythm where you are inclined
Working steady to the time of termination"

^^without fail jump at the opputunity you get ... sharp your skills and work with determination... surely success will be all yours ... loved the metaphors used here and the imgary...

"Was the end not the beginning with the declaration?
As the declaration of independence was signed"

^^ I found these two lines a little off... because 'declaration ' was used twice and the syllable count of first line dint match the other stanza... well the emotion is all there ...

beautiful write..

Thankyou