Nicole,

a poem about deforestation, a worthy poem indeed. I too like the way that you have described the way you saw the trees, saw their beauty and felt their plea.

Well done on this.

Michael

Beautiful write...

"stand together to bring warmth,
so that all eyes may see."
^^ loved the emotion behind these lines... the way the stand bare gives a kind of inspiration...

Deforestation indeed should be stopped before its too late...

wonderful read...

When i read this poem, it gives me this feeling of peace and serenity. I like how you penned this down... the way you describe kindda bring the atmosphere closer to the readers.

We are all connected, just as one,
Don't tear us down or it will be done.

^^ This is a beautiful way to end it. though they are planted sparsely, they are all connected as one as a forest. Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5