by Courageous Dreamer Feb 3, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The sun once shining with your fervent love, |
by Lonely Rider
I loved the title ... thats what captured me... and the contents beautifully complemented the title.. |
by Blissful
"The sun that once shined your fervent love, |
by Perfection
A truly sad poem. I love how you use contrasts as amplifiers. Deep and emotionel. Well structured and well presented. It is plesant to read and there are no problems with structure or anything like that. |
by The Prince
This is so saddening, I loved the title. Really gives the reader an idea of what's to come. I got an image of an alone girl standing in a forest with icy tears trickling down her cheeks. The descriptions were very vivid. |
by Mister 47
I love how you pinned the icy tears , i done that in one of mine , that proove that this feeling is true. |