Preoccupied Thoughts

At first upon seeing how short it was, I doubted how powerfully this would strike me, but it really flows amazing, strong words, strong emotions. You are a true genius with words.

*I was just scanning your page and I found this short yet well versed and amazing poem*

"Pondering amidst a colossal crowd,
wondering within a jostle sound.
Empuzzled thoughts linger within,
mizzling down upon thy skin. "
- obviously it has four lines and each lines coincides with each other, if a line will be omitted then the poem couldn't stand on it's own, the piece would be destroyed if that's the case. All I can say it flowed pretty well, well I mean flawless with a strong concluding rhyme. Wonderful write! as expected from you.

=5/5=

Great flow and usage of words that kept me completely intrigued and had me grasping each and every word. Even though this was short, there was so much said, so much detais packed in the lines. By the end, I wished there was more, keep up the great work! 5/5 from me, keep writing, always and forever....

I can relate to this neat poem package

Awesome job! couldn't be any better.
keep up the amazing work!!
5/5