Wow, I adored this, so short, yet so amazingly detailed. I liked the internal rhyme. The use of 'thy' gives it an archaic feel. Splendid work mate, great word choice.

-Danny

This is SCRUMPTIOUS! It is hard to win me over in such a short piece .. they really are difficult to pull off, but you have done so flawlessly. Your word choice was needless to say: interesting and intriguing. I also loved the internal rhyme (: A short piece, while intricate and strong. A nicely captured moment, I enjoyed it!

Awesome job! couldn't be any better.
keep up the amazing work!!
5/5

I can relate to this neat poem package

Great flow and usage of words that kept me completely intrigued and had me grasping each and every word. Even though this was short, there was so much said, so much detais packed in the lines. By the end, I wished there was more, keep up the great work! 5/5 from me, keep writing, always and forever....

*I was just scanning your page and I found this short yet well versed and amazing poem*

"Pondering amidst a colossal crowd,
wondering within a jostle sound.
Empuzzled thoughts linger within,
mizzling down upon thy skin. "
- obviously it has four lines and each lines coincides with each other, if a line will be omitted then the poem couldn't stand on it's own, the piece would be destroyed if that's the case. All I can say it flowed pretty well, well I mean flawless with a strong concluding rhyme. Wonderful write! as expected from you.

=5/5=

At first upon seeing how short it was, I doubted how powerfully this would strike me, but it really flows amazing, strong words, strong emotions. You are a true genius with words.