This is a beautiful villanelle with the natural imagery setting the mood or reflecting the cycles of the winter season

That's a unique rhyming pattern you got there... not really a fan of nature poems but loved yours.

Very good i loved it!@@
keep up the great work.

Wow this gave me a amazing image in my mind while i was reading it. nature it is beautiful n caputring the beauty in words u have done here. nicely done.\
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Very good, i love it!

Well done with the rhyming, it must have been hard trying to rhyme with only one intonation and still pulling off such a nice poem with flow. i really liked it. 5/5

xx Denise