She's your daughter

by Fire Catches   Feb 5, 2009


*This is dedicated to my twin sister Jessica
She's been going through so much*
**Love you sis**

Guide her through the day
Help her through the tears
Cover the bad
And kill her fears

Make her stronger
And open to love
Make her realize
That she can soar above

Show her the possibilities
Light the path for her to follow
Tell her happy endings
And not all people are shallow

Bring her sun
End by star lit night's
Tell her dreams can go far
By never seen heights

But tell her you love her
That she's not a piece of dirt
Cause she's your daughter
That nobody can hurt

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    The first two stanzas in this piece I felt let the piece down, because of their structure, content, rhymes and lack of strength. The other three were a little better. Some lines were good, like ‘By never seen heights’ and ‘that nobody can hurt’ (when coupled with the line before ‘Cause she's your daughter’), but nothing in this piece particularly stood out for me, sorry.

    Brad

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    A poem filled with compassion and care. Always wanting the better for your sister. Thats a true bond between siblings. What a lovely thing to do for her. I imagine that she would appreciate this a great deal.
    A really simple poem, but the meaning and care behind your simple wording was amazing.
    keep up the great work!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    So sweet. It's nice to see that you love your sister so much, and that you wish for a better life for her. I'm sure that you know she's not a piece of dirt and even if your mother will not tell her, you always can. At least then she will know that someone believes in her and loves her unconditionally.
    A wonderful write, I enjoyed it.
    Nice work

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