Comments : You Know I'm No Good

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I like what you have written. It's just so relatable. Eventhough i'm a guy this things kindda happens vice versa.Each and every lines wat portrayed clearly of how the protagonist is feeling towards mr wrong. Though it sux to fall for mr wrong...it is still not too late to back out from it.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow Skye I just loved this! The flow was flawless and your rhyme didn't seem forced at all. This was so easy for many to relate with which is why it touched onto my heart cause I know exactly what you were talking about. We all fall fo someone we think is no good for us yet we fall anyone. Its a cycle sometimes we cannot control but you don't have to give up just cause you run into a lot of frogs on your way to your prince.

    "I'll just try again with the next Mr. Wrong guy."
    ^ I loved how you ended it! It tied everything together nicely.

    Well done.
    *5/5* :]