Sasha it was great doing this collab with you. I mean you words and mine juz interwined with each other very smoothly as we both are know the direction tt we are heading and i can't believe tt we achieve this in less than an hour.Indeed it was a pleasure working with a talented poet such as u.Well i hope to do more collabs with u in the future;)

-Azzza

This was such a beautiful love poem Sasha! You and Azzza did an amazing job. I could feel the emotion you both created with your words and it was obvious it came straight from your heart. I enjoyec the rhyme scheme because it did not seem forced and truly added to the beauty of the piece. Great flow, use of word choice, and imagery. You both crafted a flawless piece of love.

Well done.
*5/5* :]

All right. Let me take a moment here to catch my breath......
I love the collabs you two manage to script. It seems as easy as breathing for you. I agree with Sasha, I think this may be the best yet. I felt as though I was right there. It was amazing. Every couplet was a masterpiece in my opinion. I really enjoyed reading this. I think it will go into my favorites. :) 5/5

Wow i am still recovering from the shock i had when i read this poem it is sooooo amazing what a collabo!

Sasha, you and Azzza are a pair made in heaven, such beautiful poetry you two make together:) *hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Wow...I mean really WOW !!
what a perfect collab Azzza and Sasha !!
I didn't know you guys are that stunning in love poetry.
I'm in absolute awe..this truly amazed me..I don't read these passionate beautiful love poems here a lot.
I so much loved the rhyme, the rhythm and the music of the piece..flow couldn't be more amazing than this
I'm definitely in love with this piece.

Very excellent work you two
Write on

Hmm, soo much owrds and metaphres yet easy ti understand and feel , the flow was great , and so the rhyming except with "glitter and answer" i thought it was weak a but here

"Lost in your dark eyes with no way out of this maze
Clouds of lust roll in covering us in a poetic haze"

these are my favortie lines

and i loved all the metaphores used

great job^_^

Professing undying love through rhyme and verse
Written in a shade of ink you can never reverse

I would change can never to can't , because that makes the syllable count even and makes the poem flow much better .

Scriptures permanently embedded on the heart
Piercing through our skin as modern day art

perhaps add does after as , it helps the syllable count again . I really like the imagery of this stanza .

Covering the truth with a sultry veil of distraction
It's time to exchange this lover's poetic transaction

Perfect .

No longer speaking a language of metaphors
Seasons of love flourish opening new doors

Once again flawless , with amazing imagery .

As these beautiful aspirations seem to submerge
You send three flawless words in which I immerge

... I think you got submerge and emerge mixed up . Emerge is like , comming out .. And submerge is like falling into ..

Lost in your dark eyes with no way out of this maze
Clouds of lust roll in covering us in a poetic haze

Fate is coloring my life with rainbows and glitter
Years of endless searching, I finally found my answer

The rest of the rhymes in this poem are so good .. So this last stanza throws off the read .

Shrouded under the mist letting our lips eclipse
Caressing skin to skin, decoding body scripts

Change body to bodily .. It makes more sense .

Waking up weak in your arms under a starry night
Infatuation so strong, unable to resist or fight

Clear interpretations, giving in to sweet temptation
Writing a million phrases, inspired by our creation

This poem is amazing , and you both did a great job . I would add some more punctuation throughout the poem .. And pay more attention to the syllable count to help the flow . 5/5 , and if my comment helps , please remember to praise !

Wow, wow, wow!
Your best collab yet, in my opinion.
Truly amazing! Wow! This piece of poetry screamed love.. i really enjoyed reading it.
Your collabs are wonderfully written, but this one just stood out on top for me.

Lost in your dark eyes with no way out of this maze
^^ I love this. It made me think of looking into someones eyes and not being able to look away.. lovee <3

I dont even have words to describe how amazing this piece of amazing poetry is. It was a stunning poem.
Keep writing together, you two really work together well.
5/5

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!

This is a very well done collab, seamless so that you cannot tell who wrote which lines. It is a beautiful love poem. Good job to both writers. 5/5

"Professing undying love through rhyme and verse
Written in a shade of ink you can never reverse

Scriptures permanently embedded on the heart
Piercing through our skin as modern day art"

^^Ahhh...what a beautiful, beautiful opening! The imagery within these lines is absolutely fantastic, so striking and creates such vivid pictures in my mind, while the flow is faultless.

"Covering the truth with a sultry veil of distraction
It's time to exchange this lover's poetic transaction

No longer speaking a language of metaphors
Seasons of love flourish opening new doors"

^^I'm finding this piece to become better and better as I go along, with each line better than the one before it.

"As these beautiful aspirations seem to submerge
You send three flawless words in which I immerge"

^^I didn't like the use of "you" here...maybe: Sending three flawless words in which I immerge?

"Lost in your dark eyes with no way out of this maze
Clouds of lust roll in covering us in a poetic haze"

^^Favourite lines of the piece, these are just beautiful.

"Fate is coloring my life with rainbows and glitter
Years of endless searching, I finally found my answer"

^^I love the imagery within the first line, however I didn't like the rhyimg, up until now the rhyme has been perfect and it falters here which threw me a little.

"Shrouded under the mist letting our lips eclipse
Caressing skin to skin, decoding body scripts

Waking up weak in your arms under a starry night
Infatuation so strong, unable to resist or fight"

^^I really enjoyed the emotion and depth within these lines, they are easily felt and left me with such a sweet feeling.

"Clear interpretations, giving in to sweet temptation
Writing a million phrases, inspired by our creation"

^^This is a beautiful way to wrap this piece up..

I am left speechless with this piece, apart from the minor two things I pointed out, I found this to be perfect.

The flow is flawless throughout, rolls right of the tongue, while the imagery, wording, and content all melt together to create a beautiful read.

You can always tell when a collab is good when you can't tell who wrote which part, as is the case here.

I hope to see more of you two in the future.

A true pleasure to read, the scene flows softly from the readers mouth and unfolds wounderfully in front of them. ther choice of wards was really good but a bit simple at times. all in all a real good poem =) credit to the writers