Comments : Perfect~Rictameter

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well..your poem was faultless too, young lady!

    I loved this, such a sweet dedication to our Savior:)

    Very well done!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I think you did a good job following the structure of a rictameter , and you show your appreciation for god really well . I can't really critique you for it since you followed the structure .. So I guess I'll have to leave it at good job .

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    This is a perfect rictameter! Pardon the pun, haha. Great language, nice imagery, a really nice read. Good work.