Comments : My Mind is Ready to Burst.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Temps,

    I will tell you a story:

    When I was exactly your age (16) I had a boyfriend. He was 20 years old and I thought the world of him. We went steady for over a year and I felt like we would be together forever. One afternoon I was with him. I loved being with him, because at home my father used to beat me up, and we sat on his bed and all of a sudden he told me he wanted out. I gasped for air and asked him why. He said he loved me with all his heart, but could no longer deal with his friends liking me so much. I cried and told him it was not my fault how I looked and that I was kind to everybody, without exeption...He wouldn't listen and he just sent me away, from one minute to the other. I was so shocked and went home to nothing...I was always being abused there in every single way. It took me two years to overcome what happened and I did really bad things to myself during that time, like skipping school and drinking too much. It was unfair and it felt like the earth had stopped...but somehow I survived and I know you will too, no matter how bad your heart is aching now.
    You are stronger than you realize..and you don't have to do it alone:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Showing you the future may not be the best way to go.Just wait it out. Things will get better in time. Everything takes time. I know how you feel well just a little bit no one really knows how you feel everyday or just right now. I loved this poem it was very well written. Just wait and things will get better. They might not today nor tomorrow..Maybe things wont get better for months but inorder for you to get better you need to be at the lowest point. 5/5
    -Kortney-

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Love always begin with a flame , he burn hte couple , make them think that life will bend to there will in life.

    then they will get maried and they think that love will stay a burning flame and then when it dont .. things get tense.. words that should be said become unspoken , and feelings that should envolve and grow , dont .

    and slowly words become lines , and the lines become pharagraph , till it become iompossible to reach the other like you used to in the past . and that man or women you once loved become soo far from you , and slowly you will look at him or her and dont know who he is ..

    if only adults know how to become kids again in hearts , many of our problems will be gone

    great poem temps , and i hope your family start seeing , and fixing there problems soon ^_^

    you have my vote