Nawww love this poem as it's how i'm feeling...well done
5/5

"Then that one day you came along"
'then that' ruins the flow of the poem, I think you should pick one or the other.

I liked the last verse the best. It held a lot of the poem's emotion, and the last line is what made it magical. This one was a good one as well, just that one little thing to edit, and it should be great!

Keep it up!

Very well written. 5/5