by Gizmo
I love the title it really is a unique one, but you could've held onto that idea the whole way through, you forgot the school part in the poem, so you should have possibly changed the title. |
by Gasttlee
Whoa! I can relate. I feel so painfully alone everyday. You express this type of stuff better than I do. 5/5 |
by Em
Very meaningful, true and deep piece. Good job, 5/5. Em x |