Everyday

by mrsmoore   Feb 6, 2009


Everday another fight
Another argument
Another wonder
Another depression

Everyday another thought
Another prayer
Another mood
Another transgression

Everyday another worry
Another heartache
Another doubt
Another feeling of disgust

Everyday I miss us
The happy days
The happy moments
The happy kisses plus

Everyday I miss you
The way we were
The way we could be
The way I would care

Today I want peace
With how we turned out
With how things ended
With the painful dispair

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely written i like how you wrote this in a direct manner. Well I think arguments and fights are pretty normal in any relationships, but if u think than both your lives would be better if you guys parted ways, then at least part away peacefully, which is how you end your poem. That is why I enjoyed reading this;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    First line - everyday

    Interesting layout here, you didnt really give me much to really critique or comment on, but I did enjoyed how everything related to the first line of its stanza in a way. If you get what I'm saying.. the 2nd 3rd and 4th lines of each stanza reflected back to the 1st line of that stanza in a way.

    Well done with this.
    Sorry I'm so late with giving you your comment!!

    5/5 Temps!

  • 15 years ago

    by Joseph R Hanna

    Made me cry

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    This is a quant little poem. not harsh, not strong really, but a good read for inspiration. 5/5 for it was a true poem. and I appreciate others work.
    From PoetryKnight

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well this is a nicely compose poem... i like the structure of this poem, it is simple yet easy and straightforward for the readers to comprehend. Well indeed everyday, everywhere in the world, someone would get into arguement , some would miss/love someone etc... but if we were to step back and see the overview of life... it's actual the part and parcel of life. Well i certainly enjoy reading this poem. Keep it up

    Excellent Job
    5/5