by mrsmoore Feb 6, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Everday another fight |
by Faithless
Nicely written i like how you wrote this in a direct manner. Well I think arguments and fights are pretty normal in any relationships, but if u think than both your lives would be better if you guys parted ways, then at least part away peacefully, which is how you end your poem. That is why I enjoyed reading this;) |
First line - everyday |
Made me cry |
by PoetryKnight
This is a quant little poem. not harsh, not strong really, but a good read for inspiration. 5/5 for it was a true poem. and I appreciate others work. |
by Faithless
Well this is a nicely compose poem... i like the structure of this poem, it is simple yet easy and straightforward for the readers to comprehend. Well indeed everyday, everywhere in the world, someone would get into arguement , some would miss/love someone etc... but if we were to step back and see the overview of life... it's actual the part and parcel of life. Well i certainly enjoy reading this poem. Keep it up |