Comments : Everyday

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Excellent use of repetition . It's usually a problem in most poems , but you made beauty out of it . I have nothing bad to say .. And the idea is really easy to relate to . Fantastic job really , 5/5 .

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well this is a nicely compose poem... i like the structure of this poem, it is simple yet easy and straightforward for the readers to comprehend. Well indeed everyday, everywhere in the world, someone would get into arguement , some would miss/love someone etc... but if we were to step back and see the overview of life... it's actual the part and parcel of life. Well i certainly enjoy reading this poem. Keep it up

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    This is a quant little poem. not harsh, not strong really, but a good read for inspiration. 5/5 for it was a true poem. and I appreciate others work.
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  • 15 years ago

    by Joseph R Hanna

    Made me cry

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    First line - everyday

    Interesting layout here, you didnt really give me much to really critique or comment on, but I did enjoyed how everything related to the first line of its stanza in a way. If you get what I'm saying.. the 2nd 3rd and 4th lines of each stanza reflected back to the 1st line of that stanza in a way.

    Well done with this.
    Sorry I'm so late with giving you your comment!!

    5/5 Temps!

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely written i like how you wrote this in a direct manner. Well I think arguments and fights are pretty normal in any relationships, but if u think than both your lives would be better if you guys parted ways, then at least part away peacefully, which is how you end your poem. That is why I enjoyed reading this;)