by emily Feb 6, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
-- I know your doing fine wit out me, but baby I'm not doing so good wit out you. I know Ur just SO GLAD that your not with me, but all i want to do is be back with you. |
That's true, love always hurts so much more when things don't work out and I thought you put forward the point across very clearly. I can feel you. Overall, a nice read (: |
I think this is a very strong poem.. its very well put together.. 5/5 please right more.. cause your good at it.. |