That was amazing! Good job! I know how that feels and you really brought out the emotion with your words! 5/5!

Beautiful poem..loved the flow, rhyming and the message you conveyed:)

Keep writing, mr. Raven!

5/5 Ingrid

Once again, the use of questions. When someone we love does leave, we all have questions. Why, was it me, did I do something wrong, most of all WHY. We may think there is nothing to believe in but there is life after losing a love and you most certainly should live to see another dawn. Life is not always like this, there will be good times and bad times and sometimes ignorant bliss is not to bad. You should never give up that someday you will have true love. One thing I have learned after my many years, once I stopped looking for love, it found me. Good job on this write. 5/5

It's amazing how right you were Sylvia, after so long, I have found someone