by Mister 47
I wonder uif i can streal that one ^_^ |
Excellent song, I could seriously see this a famous piece! I loved the wording and the truth of it all, there was just so much meaning, it left me breathless. Well-expressed thoughts and emotions, a enjoyable read from start to finish. 5/5 from me, take care. Keep writing, always and forever....... |
by Hollymariee
When your sorrows start to haunt you |
by Teria
Wow. Thats all I have to say. Theres a few parts that are iffy to me, but I think when you're writing a song that it's different than poetry. So, overall it's an amazing piece. But, the piece itself is great. It seems to flow well and I could feel the rhythm/beat. Which always makes out for a great song! |