by Paige Lea Feb 6, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You can't fix these scars |
by mandy
That was beautifuly written. There was something in the rhyme scheme that made the flow shaky throughout the poem, but the emotions were so strong that it drowned out all of the rest. The title also got my attention, and your message came through clearly. Keep writting, 5/5! |