Little Girl, Emo?

by kate   Feb 7, 2009


Drowning in your waters of deception, crying out for anyones attention.
One cut two, is it getting through?
Four cut five, am i still alive?
Six cut seven, guess this means go till eleven.
Eight cut nine, LOOK! this is more than a line!
Ten cut eleven, I'm not sure if I'm dead , but I'm not in heaven.

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  • 15 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Wow. this piece was sad. I really liked it and I liked the beginning of the lines. It was..unique. I think my favorite part was the first line. The flow was very smooth and the rhyme was good. I feel that the only thing that lacked was emotion. Like it seemed like the need for the poem to rhyme took away some emotion from the piece. But regardless, 5/5 :]

  • 15 years ago

    by 14th

    Love it

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