This was amazing poem...it had a lot of illustrations.

i think this poem deals with a lot of pain..mainly because the reader is the doll maker, instead of the one being created. i feel like the doll has given up and the dollmaker was her only option out...almost as if it was her last resort.

Good job =D

I interpreted as a take on the hype around external beauty... how people expect a girl to have a beautiful perfect figure ... loved the metaphor you have used ...

"Don't you worry little girl,
You'll be beautiful when this pain ends."

^^ its so heartfekt to see girls going under the knife for that perfect figure ... and its the society thats makes them do so ...

wonderful write :)

just as a Doll is lifeless and without emotions... people think we are dolls and could be modified into so called perfect shapes ... without realising how much pain it causes ...

Wow this is certain a refeshing read. i like the concept of you dolling up a doll. It's something I never thought that i would come across but it's gd as the concept of writting it is pretty unique and throughout the poem, i can sense your passion for this doll that you possess as if it was ur bestfriend whom you always want to make her look beautiful. I really enjoy reading this. keep it up

Excellent job
5/5

Good job girl! wow...i really liked the image in this poem.....where do you find time to write???? seriously