Comments : The Road and The Radio

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jenn
    This is a great piece.

    Wind rushing
    Heart beating
    Blood pulsing
    Through a reborn spirit

    I can just feel the exciment in your words here.

    Every end
    Is a new beginning
    Tired of settling
    Wings emotionally clipped

    The feelings of being emotionaly beaten down by someone who is suppose to love you. Ready to leave it all behind with a fresh start.

    Not running from my past
    Soaring towards my future
    Nothing but a song
    On a road caressing the horizon

    I love the way you worded this
    "Not running from my past
    Soaring towards my future"
    Because we can never run from our past it follows where ever we go.

    The unknown
    Never felt so fearless
    Leaving you behind
    Never felt so right

    The ending is great....gaining your courage back...no longer being afraid.....The hope for a better tomorrow.
    Great job!
    (((Hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I rem reading this one for the contest and am glad that i am commenting on it today.

    Great write, simple words and more than poem i found this one to be lyrics...would surely turn to a great song.

    all the best and take care