Mistake

by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX   Feb 7, 2009


I don't love you
but i tried to
i didn't care
cos you weren't there

you never loved me
cos you see
you only wanted sex
well go back to your ex

i new you would
i new you could
i was 100% right
thats why i didn't fight

it's OK I'm fine
not even crossing the line
i don't want you
i was sick of what you do

it was only confusion
a stupid delusion
what we had was fake
it was only a big mistake

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was amazing! Loved this poem alot. And i can totalllllyyy relate. Every word you wrote down here hit me so hard! Very relatable piece. keep it up. 5/5 x

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well I just feel the anger over your ex poured out into words. Well It sux to know that someone you love only wants one thing(sex)...and having going thru the times together only to find out that everthing was a fake. But from this experience, we can turn it into life's lesson.Well i hope you're ok now.

    But a few suggestions:
    I would capitolize all the 'I's &
    correct the cos to cause

    But other than that it was nicely written;)

    Excellent Job
    5/5

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