Well I just feel the anger over your ex poured out into words. Well It sux to know that someone you love only wants one thing(sex)...and having going thru the times together only to find out that everthing was a fake. But from this experience, we can turn it into life's lesson.Well i hope you're ok now.

But a few suggestions:
I would capitolize all the 'I's &
correct the cos to cause

But other than that it was nicely written;)

Excellent Job
5/5

This was amazing! Loved this poem alot. And i can totalllllyyy relate. Every word you wrote down here hit me so hard! Very relatable piece. keep it up. 5/5 x