by xToBeWithYoux Feb 7, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A hug welcomes you |
Excellent poem, first off the flow was flawless as was the wording. And every single word was extremely captivating and held my attention from the start to the finish. I really loved how you made me feel like I was there watching this, and you made the emotions so real. Well-expressed, you clearly stated everything you were thinking and this is heartfelt. 5/5 from me, take care. Keep writing, always and forever... |