So afraid to face an emotional journey
To reveal a heart that might get broken
Admit to reaching out to humanities weak
To seek what his counterpart has long known, that
tears heal

^^Words of wisdom, dear Deana:)

I love this ode to men as I love men in general*grins*

A beautiful poem, very sincere and very true!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Really liked this. These lines:

"He walks as the ruler of the world, his world
This creature so real and yet so illusive"

I thought were the best until I read these:

"To seek what his counterpart has long known, that
tears heal"
Absolutely brilliant.
Overall an informative and creative write.

Always,
Jeannie

Deana
What a wonderful piece. Very thought provoking. Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Deana,
I am amazed at this beautiful piece of work. In awe of the talent you posess in this piece and you bring it forth so elegantly. Everyone talks about the wonder of a woman but you have perfected the essence of a man. Without them we are weak, they are truly what makes us. Wonderful Job!!

Congrtas on your Honrable mention :)

This is one of the best poem i ahve read on this site.

So afraid to face an emotional journey
To reveal a heart that might get broken
Admit to reaching out to humanities weak
To seek what his counterpart has long known, that
tears heal

This one is spl breathtaking stanza.

all the best and take care
God