Anger

by Blah Blah Blahhhh   Feb 8, 2009


The taste of the rusty bitter blood,
And the fire running through my veins.
I feel my racing pulse
While I start to shake
All i hear is the yelling and the screaming
While i feel the stinging blow of the slapping in my face
I see and feel the hatred building up
The adrenaline starting its course through the inside of me
All I can see is violence,
Cant think of anything else to say,
You walk away as if nothing
While I lay there trying to recover and
I wonder if this is ever going to end

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I could feel the hatred and anger ringing loud and clear throughout this piece, good job with that, it came alive for the reader. Your "i"s should be capitalized and "cant" should be "can't".

    Thanks for the read, keep it up!

    God bless you and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great work hun. keep up the amazing work. Shanik

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